Check and log
Are the objects in your drawings the correct size and shape in relation to each other?
Do the shapes between the objects look correct?
Do the objects in yours drawing look solid?
Have you managed to create a feeling of depth in your your drawings?
The objects are the correct size and shape in relation to each other and the shapes in between look correct.
They could look a bit more solid but that would rely on tone and shadows.
Also, there would be more depth if there were shadows to imply they a ground the objects were sitting on.
I could have put them on a cloth and used more perspective to imply more depth.
The ellipses are not quite right especially the tall jar which is too narrow compared to the small jug in front of it. They do not look as though they are seen from the same view point.
I also noticed that when photographing the drawings, the camera could make the verticals lean unless I was absolutely parallel to the page.
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